Best author

I have been found my best author while reading Story-in-a-Box. I rated the story as a ten on a 10-point scale, because there is no obvious mistake in the whole story, and the main role’s amazing trip attracted me so deeply. “King Dina Salifou was told to collect three chestnuts and these three chestnuts symbolize “Equality” “Justice” and “Wisdom”” (1) makes the story become meaningful. “The king was told in order to remove this curse; he must plan a trip in different parts of the world and collect different items throughout his journey.” (2)this topic sentence leads the whole story, and also grabs readers’ interest. “He heard of a dancing man with a drum whom he brought back with him to show his people how to celebrate and the curse was lifted ……………………….” (3) conclusion is not well development, celebration can be described more detailed. 

(1) en191fl12s28mohamedto.blogspot.com/Story-in-a-Box, Sept.4, 2012

(2)same

(3)same